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You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

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Dear Ms Snyder, on
this
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 ,occasion I am writing to you regarding a leave request. I will explain the reason why and I will give you more details below. My sister is getting married in Bali on
October
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 8th, So will be really important to her my presence at that special moment of her life. And
also
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, I am planning to take some days off before the wedding to have the opportunity to explore the island. My leave will be effective from
October
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 1st to
October
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 15th. I will be absent for only 2 weeks that would not affect any sector of the business because I had checked
last
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 year's sales and it has shown that it was the quietest month of the year.
On the other hand
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 respect to Ryan's meeting, it will be effected on
October
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 10th so I could assist and of ,course I will finish his project before going to the holidays having everything ready for my return to work. Look forward to hearing back from you. kind regards. Gonzalo

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