You need to take some time off of work to go on holiday. Write a letter to your direct manager. In your letter: Ask for time off and explain why Provide the dates and times for which you will be unavailable to work Describe what you will do to prepare or make up for your absence Write at least 150 words. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Ms. Snyder,

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Dear Ms Snyder, on

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,occasion I am writing to you regarding a leave request. I will explain the reason why and I will give you more details below. My sister is getting married in Bali on

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8th, So will be really important to her my presence at that special moment of her life. And

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, I am planning to take some days off before the wedding to have the opportunity to explore the island. My leave will be effective from

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1st to

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15th. I will be absent for only 2 weeks that would not affect any sector of the business because I had checked

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year's sales and it has shown that it was the quietest month of the year.

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respect to Ryan's meeting, it will be effected on

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10th so I could assist and of ,course I will finish his project before going to the holidays having everything ready for my return to work. Look forward to hearing back from you. kind regards. Gonzalo

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

174 words

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