The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

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The two given maps illustrate the changes after the construction of tourist facilities on an

island

Overall

, the constructions of the

island

make a lot of differences except for the coconut trees and the beach. It can be noticed at the left of the

island

, a swimming spot has been added near the beach. There is

also

a short footpath connecting the beach to the accommodation. The accommodation has been built around the coconut tree. In the centre of the

island

, there is a reception in front of the pier after it is converted from the sea. At the back of the reception, there is

also

a restaurant that has been constructed. Another accommodation has been made beside the reception. At the

far-right

Correct your spelling

far right

show examples

of the

island

, the coconut trees remain the same and nothing has been constructed there.

Hence

this

ends the report.

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