The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

#two #maps #show #island #construction #tourist #facilities #summarise #information #features #comparisons

The two given maps illustrate the changes after the construction of tourist facilities on an

island

Overall

, the constructions of the

island

make a lot of differences except for the coconut trees and the beach. It can be noticed at the left of the

island

, a swimming spot has been added near the beach. There is

also

a short footpath connecting the beach to the accommodation. The accommodation has been built around the coconut tree. In the centre of the

island

, there is a reception in front of the pier after it is converted from the sea. At the back of the reception, there is

also

a restaurant that has been constructed. Another accommodation has been made beside the reception. At the

far-right

Correct your spelling

far right

show examples

of the

island

, the coconut trees remain the same and nothing has been constructed there.

Hence

this

ends the report.

Submitted by farahhuzaimee on Sun Mar 12 2023

Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.

Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".

▼

Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.

Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.

▼

Do you want to check your IELTS essays?

Submit unlimited essays, letters and charts. Sign up right now and start improving your writing skills.

4Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
1Grammar mistakes
 

4 paragraphs

143 words

0123456789.0505

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

🚀 Prepare for IELTS writing section today!

Unlimited Task 1 checks
Get all the feedback you need to keep improving your charts and letters.
Unlimited Task 2 checks
Practice and perfect your skills with essays.
Personalized suggestions
Know how to boost your score.
Detailed mistakes analysis
Get instant feedback. Spot every mistake.
Topic ideas generator
Get topic-specific ideas to enhance your writing.
Vocabulary helper
Get the right words for any topic.
Progress tracking
Track your writing improvements.

What to do next:

Look at other essays:

7.5
band
Some people think that all university student should study whatever they want. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
The type of subjects to which university students dedicate their time to study has sparked considerable controversy. While some advocate for mere studying subjects constructive for their future, I, along with others believe that studying the favourable ones benefits them the most due to reasons further elaborated on in this essay.
7.5
band
Ielts Simon: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Many authorities believe that economic growth is their essential purpose, while many individuals argue that other parts are required to develop as well. Even though I respect to first view, I am firmly convinced of the latter notion. This essay will discuss both benefits and will give possible constructive conclusions.
7
band
Nowadays children are consuming too many sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons and the solutions to this situation?
It is believed that most kids are consuming an excessive amount of sugary beverages in recent times. The root causes for this are nowadays people especially children do not pay attention to the amount of sugar they buy along with the lack of concern from parents for their children, and it can be addressed by the government making the retailers put labels on the categories at their store.
8.5
band
You have seen a job advertisement in some newspaper. Write a letter to your friend asking him to consider this job. Please say: - Where have you seen the ad? - What is the job description? - Why do you think, he is a suitable candidate for it?
I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits. I've come across a job advertisement that might be useful for you.
6
band
In many countries, truancy* is a serious issue for both parents and educators. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?
Truancy is a huge problem and threat for both parents and teachers. There could be many reasons why students like this action. However, they might do this because they don't like the lessons or teachers or have an exact and reasonable cause.

The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words

Some people think that all university student should study whatever they want. Other believe that they should only be allowed to study subject that will be useful in the future such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

Ielts Simon: Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

Nowadays children are consuming too many sugar-based drinks. What are the reasons and the solutions to this situation?

You have seen a job advertisement in some newspaper. Write a letter to your friend asking him to consider this job. Please say: - Where have you seen the ad? - What is the job description? - Why do you think, he is a suitable candidate for it?

In many countries, truancy* is a serious issue for both parents and educators. •What are the causes of truancy, and what may be the effects on the child and the wider community?