You recently did a shortly cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer write at least 150 words.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am happy to hear that you asked for my feedback about the cookery
course
. My opinion about the training is positive. Trying to cook different kinds of meals is my new hobby. I especially liked making cakes with beautiful designs. I am looking better about cooking after the
course
. And trying different tastes was the best benefit of the
course
. Since I completed the lectures, I have cooked every meal for my family.
Moreover
, for the birthday parties of my close friends, I am cooking wonderful things like cakes and cookies. It is a better gift for them. I think you should arrange another cookery
course
which includes traditional foods.
For example
India or China. I believe that it will be interesting and people would like to join. I hope my ideas will be helpful to you. Thank you for arranging
such
a useful cookery
course
. Yours Faithfully, İrem.
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