the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
the two maps illustrate how the
road
ran through a city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
Overall
, it can be seen in the maps, the city
hospital underwent a considerable transformation over the given period.
In 2007, a city
hospital had many empty lands and no facilities sufficiently. However
, there had three main roads, a ring road
which was on the north side of a city
hospital, it had emerged with hospital road
and a city
road
. Moreover
, there had a bus
stop nearby a hospital road
and also
a car park for officers and the public close to the bus
stop on the right-hand side of the hospital road
.
By 2010, the south of the city
hospital, there had been developed substantially and a ring road
has been connected with the hospital road
by roundabouts the bus
station was constructed in the southeast of the city
hospital which replaced a bus
stop. Additionally
, a public car park was built on the northeast side, while
the staff car park remained in the same place as in the year 2007.Submitted by evetanyaporn on
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