the two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
the two maps illustrate how the
road
ran through a Use synonyms
city
hospital between 2007 and 2010.
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Overall
, it can be seen in the maps, the Linking Words
city
hospital underwent a considerable transformation over the given period.
In 2007, a Use synonyms
city
hospital had many empty lands and no facilities sufficiently. Use synonyms
However
, there had three main roads, a ring Linking Words
road
which was on the north side of a Use synonyms
city
hospital, it had emerged with hospital Use synonyms
road
and a Use synonyms
city
Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
Moreover
, there had a Linking Words
bus
stop nearby a hospital Use synonyms
road
and Use synonyms
also
a car park for officers and the public close to the Linking Words
bus
stop on the right-hand side of the hospital Use synonyms
road
.
By 2010, the south of the Use synonyms
city
hospital, there had been developed substantially and a ring Use synonyms
road
has been connected with the hospital Use synonyms
road
by roundabouts the Use synonyms
bus
station was constructed in the southeast of the Use synonyms
city
hospital which replaced a Use synonyms
bus
stop. Use synonyms
Additionally
, a public car park was built on the northeast side, Linking Words
while
the staff car park remained in the same place as in the year 2007.Linking Words
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