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Students perform better in schools when they are rewarded rather than punished. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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 of
students
 is better to form them in a good way with
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 treatment, whether their achievement or punishment. In
this
 case, I completely agree with the statement. Giving
such
 a penalty for
students
 in
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 form is much better with lessons intended in it. Everything that pupils learn from school will always save in their memory, including bad things that they get. One of
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, the most mischievous disciple usually gets different treatment
due to
 their attitude or other,
then
 the teacher punishes them by cutting their hair and making them ashamed in front of their classmates.
Instead
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 they will be afraid and wary, it could be a huge possibility causing them to have resentment towards the teacher.
Therefore
, a wise punishment will give good feedback too for the
students
. Vice versa, an announcement
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 accomplishment in front of
class
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the class
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 could change another perception.
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, mostly as a
learner
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they
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have a dream to become
as
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the best
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they can
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 showing them a reward from their mate
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can be a factor to motivate them if all pupils could do like their friends did with consideration without extremely giving different treatment or turning down the spirit of other
students
.
Hence
,
students
 will not
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themselves
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 but they will feel more optimistic.
To sum
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this
 essay, creating memorable moments is more significant than punishment in a worse way. All
students
 have the same right and aim to be successful,
thus
 not only
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, as long as they show nice progress. Teachers could give a small recognition that inspired pupils to grow to be preferable again.
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