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Some people think that the government is wasting money on arts and that this money could be better spent elsewhere. To what extent do you agree with this view?

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Some governments spend a big deal of
money
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 on
art
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 and its related
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.
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 some in
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 argue investing in
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art
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 could be a waste of sources,I believe it is essential to invest in developing
art
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 in any country. there are several reasons why I believe spending
money
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 on
art
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 is imperative. First and foremost,
art
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 is thought to be very essential for any
society
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`s mental health. Artistic works
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 as music, paintings and even cinema are directly affected the human brain by motivating the release of endorphins which is known as an anti-stress hormone. A healthy community is really important since it directly impacts other
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 of
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.
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, consider a worker who suffers from deep depression; without any ,doubt their performance would be affected by their poor mental health ,
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, it would be clear how
art
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 can affect other
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 which some in
society
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 believe in more financial investment for them.
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 but not least,
art
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 is financially dependent on the authorities' help and in many countries would be disappeared unless the governments spent wealth to help artists . In some ,countries artists are in a bad financial situation since
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 with other
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such
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 as the food industry only a few parts of
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 are interested in buying artistic objects .
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 is because they are not interested in
art
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 or they do not afford to buy these items.
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, artists would not be able to make
money
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 and if they want to make a living , they must find another career. In conclusion,
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 I believe other
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 should be helped by the government , I think spending
money
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 is essential because it is important for the health of
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 , and without governmental ,help it would not survive.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enriching society
  • promoting cultural understanding
  • development of talent
  • creative industries
  • economic benefits
  • generate revenue
  • cultural heritage
  • identity
  • prioritize spending
  • needs of the majority
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