Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigar is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?

There is no denying the fact that the main impact of advertising is arguable.

While

it is a commonly held belief that prepackaged

food

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may harm

the

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society as same as smoking,

therefore

, it should be

ban

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. From my

perpective

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perspective

, I strongly agree with

this

statement.

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essay will shed light upon why I believe

this

. On the one hand, advertising processed

food

should be banned as it has deadly effects

for

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society.

For instance

, if juveniles see the

advertisment

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advertisement

of

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junk

food

, it will embolden them to buy canned

food

and they may

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addicts

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for

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it.

Subsequently

, advertising fast

food

may motivate

masses

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to buy it, especially with the introduction of

various

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number of

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delivery applications that makes it

more

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easier for the individual to buy junk

food

.

Thus

, it becomes clear that

advertisment

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advertising

convenience

food

can embolden folks to eat it.

Moreover

, advertising prepackaged

food

can lead to risky effects on

masse's

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health. To illustrate, a prestigious journal article published that 40% of youngsters were affected by colon cancer as

result

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a result

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of consuming canned

food

on regular basis.

In other words

, consuming

large

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amount

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of

such

food

can cause several critical diseases

such

as obesity, cancer and heart

diseases

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. Indeed,

this

makes it clear that advertising for unhealthy

food

may put many

burden

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on folk's health. In conclusion, in my opinion, I consider that advertising of convenience

food

should be

ban

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.

This

is because advertising

this

type of

food

can encourage youngsters to consume processed

food

as well as

it may lead to serious diseases.