Research shows that overeating can be just as harmful as smoking. Thus the advertising of certain food products should be banned, as cigar is banned in many countries. Do you agree or disagree?
There is no denying the fact that the main impact of advertising is arguable.
While
it is a commonly held belief that prepackaged food
advertisement
may harm Fix the agreement mistake
advertisements
the
society as same as smoking, Correct article usage
apply
therefore
, it should be ban
. From my Wrong verb form
banned
perpective
, I strongly agree with Correct your spelling
perspective
this
statement. This
essay will shed light upon why I believe this
.
On the one hand, advertising processed food
should be banned as it has deadly effects for
society. Change preposition
on
For instance
, if juveniles see the advertisment
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advertisement
of
junk Change preposition
for
food
, it will embolden them to buy canned food
and they may be become
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become
have become
addicts
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addicted
for
it. Change preposition
to
Subsequently
, advertising fast food
may motivate masses
to buy it, especially with the introduction of Correct article usage
the masses
various
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a various
the various
number of
delivery applications that makes it Correct quantifier usage
apply
more
easier for the individual to buy junk Change the word
apply
food
. Thus
, it becomes clear that advertisment
convenience Correct your spelling
advertising
food
can embolden folks to eat it.
Moreover
, advertising prepackaged food
can lead to risky effects on masse's
health. To illustrate, a prestigious journal article published that 40% of youngsters were affected by colon cancer as Correct article usage
the masse's
result
of consuming canned Add an article
a result
food
on regular basis. In other words
, consuming large
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a large
amount
of Fix the agreement mistake
amounts
such
food
can cause several critical diseases such
as obesity, cancer and heart diseases
. Indeed, Fix the agreement mistake
disease
this
makes it clear that advertising for unhealthy food
may put many burden
on folk's health.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I consider that advertising of convenience Change to a plural noun
burdens
food
should be ban
. Wrong verb form
banned
This
is because advertising this
type of food
can encourage youngsters to consume processed food
as well as
it may lead to serious diseases.Submitted by pt_maha on
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