Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask some more questions about the trip

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Dear Ms Stone,

This

is Sarah Johnson's mother - Ruby Johnson. I am writing

this

letter with the connection of the upcoming 3-day trip in Canada that the school is planning for the children. I would like to sign up for it if possible.

Firstly

, I am a stay-at-home mom, so I am not occupied by a job. More importantly, recently my daughter has had a severe cough which requires special care from me, but we both won't want to miss

this

trip, so I really hope that I could go with you together. To introduce more about myself, I was born in Canada,

therefore

, I am pretty sure that I could be some help during

this

trip as I am familiar with the area you are planning to go to.

In addition

, I would be able to deal with medical emergencies as I was a nurse when I was working in Canada.

Lastly

, may I know if any additional charge I would need to pay if I am allowed to go with you? And it would be helpful if you could share the exact date for the departure. Looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Ruby Johnson

Submitted by yes0418 on Mon Mar 13 2023

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