Your child is going away on a school trip for three days to another country. The head teacher wants some parents to join the trip and you would like to go. Write a letter to the head teacher. In your letter: Say why you would like to go Suggest what you could do to help during the trip Ask some more questions about the trip

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Dear Ms Stone,

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is Sarah Johnson's mother - Ruby Johnson. I am writing

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letter with the connection of the upcoming 3-day trip in Canada that the school is planning for the children. I would like to sign up for it if possible.

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, I am a stay-at-home mom, so I am not occupied by a job. More importantly, recently my daughter has had a severe cough which requires special care from me, but we both won't want to miss

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trip, so I really hope that I could go with you together. To introduce more about myself, I was born in Canada,

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, I am pretty sure that I could be some help during

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trip as I am familiar with the area you are planning to go to.

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, I would be able to deal with medical emergencies as I was a nurse when I was working in Canada.

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, may I know if any additional charge I would need to pay if I am allowed to go with you? And it would be helpful if you could share the exact date for the departure. Looking forward to your response. Yours faithfully, Ruby Johnson

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

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8 paragraphs

198 words

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