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The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the reasons why people travel to work by bicycle or by car. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given pie charts illustrate the factors which are influencing people's choices of using two different means of transport.
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, we can see that the majority of people choose to use their bikes for health, fitness and environmental advantages.
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, others drive to
work
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due to
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 comfort. Looking at the first chart, well-being and environmentally friendly benefits are the main reasons to adopt their bicycle, accounting for the highest amount at about 30% each. There is a minor percentage of citizens who decide to use their bikes in order to avoid parking problems and costs, which accounts for 15% and 13% respectively.
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, only 12% of individuals choose to use their bicycles because they think it's faster than driving. When it comes to reasons for driving to
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, about 40% of drivers consider comfort the major reason for going to
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 by car, whilst only 11% choose to drive because it is safer than cycling. The figure for distance to
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 holds the second position, occupying 21% of the total proportion.
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, the need to be faster and carry personal things with you are two reasons that share a similar percentage of 14.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words work with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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