Nowadays, a growing number of people with healt problems are trying alternative medicines and treatments instead of visiting their usual doctor. Do you think this is a positive or a negative development.

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ways

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of treating illnesses have gained quite

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. It is increasingly diverting many people from conventional doctors, and

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it may have some advantages, the change may cause certain repercussions. Diversification of

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methods with more and more people turning to other

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than medicine may reduce workload stress, and enable doctors to devote more time

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more serious diseases. In certain situations, patients with severe illnesses may not receive enough attention from

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medical personnel.

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, seeking answers in

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ways

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may

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result in patients whose illnesses demand quick

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losing valuable time.

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, trying to cure cancer with music or magnetic

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may not be a feasible option and the outcome can be catastrophic for the patient. So, despite its benefits, the shift towards

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medicines cannot always be supported. In the long term, the trend may divert people from scientifically proven

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of treating diseases, reducing society’s trust in medicine.

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can have devastating effects on

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multiple times. Another problem is many of the specialists who provide

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treatments are not qualified medical personnel, so they cannot always be trusted for the right consultation.

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of certain diseases may require certain actions

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as spending more time under the sun or the opposite.

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treatment

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may not take these factors into consideration, and

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trying to cure the patient, it can actually exacerbate the problem. In conclusion, many individuals turning to

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medicines and treatments rather than trained medical professionals may be helpful to mitigate small problems, but on a larger

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it can be more damaging

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society.