The chart below shows the gross domestic product of four different countries in 2005 and 2010.

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network usage in Britain in 2010 and their predicted estimations for the year 2018.

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, Facebook seems to be the all-time popular network to connect people in Britain and it is predicted to spread its usage significantly in 2018. Meanwhile, all the other social

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sites tend to decrease their popularity by 2018, and especially Bebo is predicted to get disappeared from existence in 2018. Facebook is by far the most popular

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to connect society in Britain, making 46.15% of social

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users in 2010. By the year 2018, it is estimated to grow its percentage up to 72.46% Which is a significant growth for its consumers. The rest of the social networks comprising more than

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half the percentage is predicted to reduce their popularity to slightly over 1/4 of their consumers and Bebo having 8.17% of their customers seems to stop using totally by 2018. Twitter, Pinterest and Google Plus are going to shrink their use compared to 2010 by approximately around 1%, 3% and 5% respectively in 2018.

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