Some people think that children should start school at the age of six or seven while others think that children should start school as young as possible. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

The competition globally is high so parents thought their children starts their carrier as far as possible.yes,it's true but
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am against
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statement because without knowledge about learning we cannot allow them to learn the children force them to go to the school the subjective knowledge of children is zero but we force them to
study
the
subject
without a basic understanding of the
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in my childhood age I do not know about the course
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, I boycott all the subjects without understanding at one point of time
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felt why I
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. another point is starting earlier we cannot enjoy childhood it's the golden period of everyone's life .
for instance
we
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in the earlier part of life after studying we are going to work there is no point in enjoyment in my conclusion,the competition is high, but we are human we need to enjoy the earlier face of life and without
subject
, the knowledge we cannot
study
full fledge
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