Some people say it is more important to plant trees in the open spaces in towns and cities than to build more housing. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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of people migrate from their place to
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.there
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a lot
alot
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of people need
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a house
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so
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tremendous
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termendous
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tremendous
amount of
building
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buildings
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are being constructed by builders but it leads to
unhealthy
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life.trees are
cutoff
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building
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are constructed caused
green
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revolution the industries are being constructed
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capital
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of the
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lot
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migration toward the capital for
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employment
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employment
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tremendous
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amount of
house
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houses
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are being constructed
on
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state
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capital so government should consider two
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plans ,it might help to reduce one
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population
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chennai
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is considered as it
hub
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the
state
commission planned two capital
system
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,
it
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reduces
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industries
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the one city
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