As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?

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last

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there

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been increased concerns about cloning human beings which

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people

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While

at first glance it seems like a good idea, I believe that it

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definitely, can have

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effect

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the shaping of future humankind. First and foremost, there is no denying that possibility of creating extra

bodyparts

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for individuals can significantly improve

lifetime

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of

people

. Cloning humans is

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breaktrough

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breakthrough

breakthroughs

in medicine which

people

saw only in science fiction movies, but in

modern

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field of

healthcare

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it has

became

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in reality.

Due to

this

discovery tremendous quantity of

people

can be saved. For

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example

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it is well-established that today's medicine has

shortage

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of organs to save and cure many

illness

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prices have to

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prices.

It is clear that

cloning can solve

this essential problems

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.

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, there are plenty of negative effects

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be faced

with

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cloning humans. Cloning animals don't

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ethical issues

such

it has human cloning like ethical issues. I firmly opine that it is cruel and inhuman to create individuals to kill them

further

to take their body parts. Cloning humans don't

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difference

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original

human

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hence

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procedure undoubtedly should consider

as

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murdering and

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of human rights.

For

example

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some

people

would

wich

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to use

this

procedure

on

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cloning not only for creating spare body parts and to recreate their

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relatives which

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from my perspective is

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of

nature

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law. In conclusion, cloning is a significantly amazing discovery, but

people

should be aware and implement

this

procedure carefully and keep in mind ethical and moral issues. Cloning should

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only on animals for sure.