As people live longer and longer, the idea of cloning human beings in order to provide spare parts is becoming a reality. The idea horrifies most people, yet it is no longer mere science fiction. To what extent do you agree with such a procedure?
Over the
last
decades
there Add a comma
,decades
has
been increased concerns about cloning human beings which Change the verb form
have
frightening
most Wrong verb form
frightens
of
Change preposition
apply
people
. Add an article
the people
While
at first glance it seems like a good idea, I believe that it is
definitely, can have Unnecessary verb
apply
controversial
effect Correct article usage
a controversial
in
the shaping of future humankind.
First and foremost, there is no denying that possibility of creating extra Change preposition
on
bodyparts
for individuals can significantly improve Correct your spelling
body parts
lifetime
of Add an article
the lifetime
people
. Cloning humans is essential
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an essential
breaktrough
in medicine which Correct your spelling
breakthrough
breakthroughs
people
saw only in science fiction movies, but in modern
field of Add an article
the modern
healthcare
it has Add a comma
,healthcare
became
in reality. Change the verb form
become
Due to
this
discovery tremendous quantity of people
can be saved. For Correct your spelling
example
exmple
it is well-established that today's medicine has Add a comma
,exmple
shortage
of organs to save and cure many Add an article
a shortage
illness
. Change to a plural noun
illnesses
In addition
organ's
prices have to Change noun form
organ
expensive
prices. Add a missing verb
be expensive
It is clear that
cloning can solve this essential problems
.
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this essential problem
these essential problems
However
, there are plenty of negative effects can
be faced Correct pronoun usage
that can
with
cloning humans. Cloning animals don't Change preposition
by
has
ethical issues Change the verb form
have
such
it has human cloning like ethical issues. I firmly opine that it is cruel and inhuman to create individuals to kill them further
to take their body parts. Cloning humans don't have
Unnecessary verb
apply
a
difference Correct article usage
apply
with
original Change preposition
from
human
, Fix the agreement mistake
humans
hence
this
procedure undoubtedly should consider as
murdering and Change preposition
apply
violation
of human rights. Correct article usage
a violation
For
example
some Add a comma
,example
people
would wich
to use Correct your spelling
wish
this
procedure on
cloning not only for creating spare body parts and to recreate their Change preposition
for
died
relatives which Replace the word
dead
is
from my perspective is Change the verb form
are
violation
of Add an article
a violation
nature
law.
In conclusion, cloning is a significantly amazing discovery, but Replace the word
natural
people
should be aware and implement this
procedure carefully and keep in mind ethical and moral issues. Cloning should be use
only on animals for sure.Change the verb form
be used
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