Littering in cities is an increasing problem which needs to be dealt with. Some people think that steeper fines is the best way to deal with the problem. To what extent do you agree?

Having bigger
fins
is certainly one way to tackle the issue of littering.
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will make
people
take littering more seriously. In my
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I strongly agreed. At the present, many
people
litter the
street
because they do not consider
this
to be a serious offence and for
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convenience purpose.
However
, by imposing a considerable penalty
people
will think twice before
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waste
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public
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place
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. Starting with
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of
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people
litter
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in the
street
tend to be one of
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reason
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reasons
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.
First,
people
usually do not feel personally responsible for the environment, and they find it easy to throw it everywhere.
In addition
, the present sanction
not
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serious enough to deter
people
and
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well known by
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fact community has
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of
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awareness in
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of public
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regarding
to
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littering.
Moreover
, the government does not provide enough
number of
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trash
can
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which can hard for
people
to hold their waste until find
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. All
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reason
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responsible
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of
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increasing the issue in cities.
However
, the best way
dealt
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with
problem
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is harsher punishment should be there to prevent it. Serious
fins
will make
people
more careful
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action
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due
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fact that there will
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.
For example
, in
China
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if you throw trash in
public
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street
will you
you
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have to pay 50$ per trash which
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people
to
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take it
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serious
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. Another approach is putting
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camera
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to
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so would be more efficient to control.
However
,
long-term
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solution
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should
be consider
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also
like
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young
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generation about the effect
of
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littering has
over
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the environment. In conclusion,
people
tend to throw waste unresponsible because lack of awareness of how harmful the landfill
to
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the environment and not being
care
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.
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Serious
fins
required
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to prevent
this
issue in my opinion.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Urban sanitation
  • Deterrence
  • Environmental stewardship
  • Public awareness
  • Civic responsibility
  • Enforcement measures
  • Sanctions
  • Penalties
  • Recycling initiatives
  • Behavioral change
  • Socio-economic impact
  • Cost-effective
  • Infrastructure for waste management
  • Community service
  • Sustainable practices
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