As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?
With the advancement of transportation,global trade become more efficient between
countries
.Now businessmen can easily export their products
overseas because of that our economy is growing exponentially and individuals have all sorts of goods in hand.Though,it has some detrimental effects like products
being more expensive .
The major benefit of global trading are
economic growth.To be precise,if the Change the verb form
is
government
exports various types of products
to foreign nations that give us foreign currency,which is a key factor in every nation's economy.For example
,Bangladesh is the largest exporter in the Asia continent in the case of cloths.Around 6-8% of GDP comes from this
industry.Another advantage is the availability of all products
.Because of
,Correct pronoun usage
thisof
environment
Correct article usage
the environment
countries
are not able to produce all kinds of food and goods,Therefore
, the government
has to export products
.To illustrate this
, England's weather is not good for farming,hence
they export vegetables from other countries
and mitigate the problem.
The high cost of products
is the primary problem in terms of global trading.This
is because the transportation expense is huge.For instance
,Bangladeshi companies import goods like chocolate,cream,shampoo and perfume but the price of these products
is too high because they spend a huge amounts
of money on transport.Correct the article-noun agreement
a huge amount
huge amounts
Along with
,that they pay government
taxes,which is insane.However
, countries
' peoples and the government
always benefited from global trading.
In conclusion,due to
the harsh ,weather
it is not possible for every country to produce all sorts of daily needs ,Add a comma
,weather
whereas
global trading solves this
issue so frequently and also
assist
the economy .Correct subject-verb agreement
assists
Although
the price of the products
is always a big concern for general people.Submitted by rabek440 on
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