As global trade increases between different countries, many daily necessities are produced in other countries. Such goods are usually transported a long distance. Do the benefits of this trend outweigh its drawbacks?

With the advancement of transportation,global trade become more efficient between
countries
.Now businessmen can easily export their
products
overseas because of that our economy is growing exponentially and individuals have all sorts of goods in hand.Though,it has some detrimental effects like
products
being more expensive . The major benefit of global trading
are
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economic growth.To be precise,if the
government
exports various types of
products
to foreign nations that give us foreign currency,which is a key factor in every nation's economy.
For example
,Bangladesh is the largest exporter in the Asia continent in the case of cloths.Around 6-8% of GDP comes from
this
industry.Another advantage is the availability of all
products
.Because
of
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,
environment
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countries
are not able to produce all kinds of food and goods,
Therefore
, the
government
has to export
products
.To illustrate
this
, England's weather is not good for farming,
hence
they export vegetables from other
countries
and mitigate the problem. The high cost of
products
is the primary problem in terms of global trading.
This
is because the transportation expense is huge.
For instance
,Bangladeshi companies import goods like chocolate,cream,shampoo and perfume but the price of these
products
is too high because they spend
a huge amounts
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of money on transport.
Along with
,that they pay
government
taxes,which is insane.
However
,
countries
' peoples and the
government
always benefited from global trading. In conclusion,
due to
the harsh ,
weather
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it is not possible for every country to produce all sorts of daily needs ,
whereas
global trading solves
this
issue so frequently and
also
assist
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the economy .
Although
the price of the
products
is always a big concern for general people.
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