Many believe that modern technology has brought people together, but others say that it has driven us apart. Discuss both viewpoints and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.
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are divided
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group argue that new Change the article
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, another group claims that because of modern Linking Words
technology
we are becoming isolated from society. From my perspective, I agree with these two groups. So, in Add a comma
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issues.
On the one hand, Correct determiner usage
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internet
gives us huge possibilities. Add an article
the internet
Firstly
, thanks to Linking Words
world
web we can get to know each other even if we live in different countries or continents. Correct article usage
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, it is Linking Words
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get
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we exchanged nicknames on Instagram. Add a comma
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As a result
, we keep in touch Linking Words
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Secondly
, all media help us to be aware of everything Linking Words
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is right now happening in the world. Change the word
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Furthermore
, modern technologies help us to kill Linking Words
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time when we need it. Correct pronoun usage
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For example
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scroll
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On the other hand
, modern technology can be harmful Linking Words
for
society. Change the preposition
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computer games. Change preposition
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Consequently
, these persons will lose interest in the world and disconnect from reality. Linking Words
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In addition
, people can become less confident. Linking Words
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, they will have communication problems with typical human beings everywhere.
By way of conclusion, modern technologies have a lot of advantages and many disadvantages. Linking Words
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