You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.
The two following pie graphs present the
consistency
of five different nutrients
but the upper one illustrates the consistency
of a medium baked potato
, whereas
the other graph shows the consistency
of a macaroni
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that carbohydrates have the highest percentage in both dishes in comparison with the other given, nutrients
. However
, macaroni
has the lowest percentage of other nutrients
, while
the potato
has its lowest consistency
of saturated fat.
On the other hand
, macaroni
has the same quantity of glucose and protein as they are both 11 percent
, Change the spelling
per cent
Also
the potato
has two nutrients
with similar consistency
which are glucose and other nutrients
with 15 percent
. Change the spelling
per cent
Nevertheless
, there is a significant difference between the amount of protein in the two dishes because macaroni
has only 11% while
the potato
has a total of 25%. Furthermore
, there is a substantial amount of saturated fat in the macaroni
which is 21%.Submitted by Retaaji72 on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words consistency, nutrients, potato, macaroni with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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