You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a university lecturer describing the data. You should write at least 150 words.

You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

The pie graphs show the nutritional consistency of two dinners. Write a report to a

university lecturer describing the data.

You should write at least 150 words.
The two following pie graphs present the
consistency
of five different
nutrients
but the upper one illustrates the
consistency
of a medium baked
potato
,
whereas
the other graph shows the
consistency
of a
macaroni
.
Overall
, it can be clearly seen that carbohydrates have the highest percentage in both dishes in comparison with the other given,
nutrients
.
However
,
macaroni
has the lowest percentage of other
nutrients
,
while
the
potato
has its lowest
consistency
of saturated fat.
On the other hand
,
macaroni
has the same quantity of glucose and protein as they are both 11
percent
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,
Also
the
potato
has two
nutrients
with similar
consistency
which are glucose and other
nutrients
with 15
percent
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per cent
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.
Nevertheless
, there is a significant difference between the amount of protein in the two dishes because
macaroni
has only 11%
while
the
potato
has a total of 25%.
Furthermore
, there is a substantial amount of saturated fat in the
macaroni
which is 21%.
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