The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.

The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
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The given pie charts illustrate the consumption of
energy
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in Australian houses and the greenhouse gas emissions from its exploitation.
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,the percentage of
energy
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used for heating took the major place in its demand
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cooling and lighting are intaking a minimum in both usage and emission sectors. Heating is consuming about 42 per cent of all
energy
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whereas
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its output constitutes only a fifth
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.Nearly 15% of
energy
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is being used on other appliances with 28 per cent of emissions.Refrigeration requires an average
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% whilst its emissions make up 14%. The figures for the input and output of water heating are almost equal to each other compiling 31 per cent on average.The minor sectors,cooling and lighting are devouring 3 % of
energy
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,meantime release of the lighting amounts to 8 %.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "whereas".
Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words energy with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • Energy consumption
  • Greenhouse gas emissions
  • Sustainable practices
  • Energy efficiency
  • Renewable energy
  • Fossil fuels
  • Carbon footprint
  • Eco-friendly appliances
  • Insulation
  • Solar panels
  • Recycling
  • Climate change
  • Kilowatt-hour (kWh)
  • Emissions-intensive
  • Energy audit
  • Smart meters
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