The first chart below shows how energy is used in an average Australian household. The second chart shows the greenhouse gas emissions which result from this energy use.
The given pie charts illustrate the consumption of
energy
in Australian houses and the greenhouse gas emissions from its exploitation.
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,the percentage of Linking Words
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used for heating took the major place in its demand Use synonyms
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cooling and lighting are intaking a minimum in both usage and emission sectors.
Heating is consuming about 42 per cent of all Linking Words
energy
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its output constitutes only a fifth Linking Words
percent
.Nearly 15% of Change the spelling
per cent
energy
is being used on other appliances with 28 per cent of emissions.Refrigeration requires an averageUse synonyms
7
% whilst its emissions make up 14%.
The figures for the input and output of water heating are almost equal to each other compiling 31 per cent on average.The minor sectors,cooling and lighting are devouring 3 % of Change preposition
of 7
energy
,meantime release of the lighting amounts to 8 %.Use synonyms
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