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More and more people want to own famous brands of cars, clothes and other items. What are the reason for this. Is this a positive or negative trend?

#people #brands #cars #clothes #items #reason #trend
There are various causes of
growing
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 demand
on
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for
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 famous brands,
in
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which the popularity of social media accounted for the largest proportion. Take many downsides into perspective,
such
 as price abuse which
violate
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 the benefit of consumers, on top of that, it could restrict the development of local
business
. I believe
such
trend
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a trend
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derive
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 more negative effects than positive ones First of all, people
at
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nowadays accustom to share their daily life on social
medias
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media
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, including well-known
business men
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businessmen
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 and women,
along with
 influencers. The
products
 they use are associated with their
glory
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 life, which
stimulate
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 the
trend
 of imitation. Take Starbucks as an example, which is one of the most popular coffee
brand
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brands
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 around the world. Despite that the
costs
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cost
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 of coffee in Starbucks
is
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are
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 higher than
regular
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in regular
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 coffee shops, their
products
 remain popular among young adults.
However
,
such
 trends could lead to a great number of issues, including
famouse
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famous
brand
 monopoly
the
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in the
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 market, restricting the development of local
business
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businesses
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.
Moreover
, it is inevitable that the majority of
products
 from well-known brands are
overcharge
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, compared to the local private institutions which use better materials with unique
design
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designs
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.
For example
, Samsung is the most famous
brand
 in Korea, users value
their
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brand
 so much that it is hard for small
business
 to promote their own
products
.
To conclude
, the development of social media lead to a growing population who prefer
purchase
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purchasing
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 based on
the
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apply
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brands.
Eventhough
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Even though
that
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though
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 it is an unstoppable
trend
, in my perspective the downsides overweight the positive
one
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ones
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.
Therefore
, I suggest it is a negative
trend
.
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