A friend has agreed to look after your house and pet while you are on holiday. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: -Give contact detail for when you are away -Give instructions about how to care for your pet - Describe other household duties Write at least 150 words

Dear Phoenix, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
letter to thank you for
help
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me to take care of my little dog and my
house
when I’ll be away from our city for my
vocation
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vacation
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to Canada next month. As scheduled, my trip will
last
for 3 weeks, from
8th
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the 8th
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to
31st
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the 31st
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of March. During
this
time, I still access social apps
such
as Viber or Zalo as usual, so you can contact me via these channels whenever you want. You may still remember my dog
who
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I bought
last
year. I prepared food for him and put it in the closet near his cage. He has three meals a day and one cup of food for each meal is enough for him. Despite
of
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the
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their
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her
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small size, he is very active, full of energy and
enjoy
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the moments playing outside the
house
. There is a small park near my
house
where you can have some pleasure time with my dog.
In addition
, the garbage is collected every Tuesday and Saturday. I have a big garbage bin next to the
house
gate where you can put all trash for collection. Again, thank you very much for your help! Lots of love, Lana
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