In your opinion, do you think that all children should be taught in a school environment? Say why you think home-schooling would not be a good idea and also point out some benefits for this chosen form of education.
In
this
era of technology, schools are known as an important institution
for children to improve their skills and knowledge. In my personal point of view, children are more organised in Fix the agreement mistake
institutions
school
environment rather than at home. Add an article
a school
This
essay will discuss the drawbacks and advantages of home-schooling.
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disadvantage
is
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over
student's
homework and behaviour. With online learning, there is Fix the agreement mistake
students'
also
a greater chance for students
to be easily distracted by social media . For example
, a
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students
attending virtual classes are not fully Add an article
the students
focus
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Therefore
, this
from
of education is likely to reduce Correct your spelling
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students'
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discipline
as well as
their behaviour.
However
, there are some benefits of online education. One of the pros is that it allows students
to attend classes from any location and saving
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cost
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students
have limited access to virtual learning, they don't have to spend their money on transports
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transport
such
as bus
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buses
taxi
and more.
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jam
in the early morning.
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However
, school plays an important role more than just education institution as it
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