Convenience food will become increasingly prevalent and eventually replace traditional foods and traditional methods of food preparation.To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion?

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,
convenience
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foods
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will increase considerably because so many
people
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prefer to choose easier
foods
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to eat, compared to conventional
food
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that needs time to prepare. I totally disagree because most
convenience
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foods
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are unhealthy
foods
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and have detrimental effects on the body.
Moreover
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, traditional
foods
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can disappear in the future. On the one hand, the majority of
convenience
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foods
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contain unhealthy nutrition.
This
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food
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has low levels of substances which are so pivotal for the body
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as high proteins and minerals.
In addition
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, the packed
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are
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the products that have been preserved before they are delivered to society
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still being in good condition for a long time. Even though these
foods
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make
people
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easier to prepare their meals and not consume time, they might
also
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be vulnerable suffer some diseases.
For instance
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, recently the number of
people
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who have been hospitalized has risen markedly since
people
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always consume unhealthy meals like canned
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.
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, their bodies are more easily attacked by pathogens. On the second hand, the extinction of traditional
foods
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will decrease. These
foods
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can represent an identity in one region or country. Presently, despite learning and cooking conventional
foods
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,
people
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especially, younger generations, tend to have a big curiosity about foreign
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such
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as Korean
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and Japanese
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.
As a result
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, it not only may cause the ability of society to preserve home-cooked
food
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to decline day to day but
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people
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can have a lack of knowledge and experience about their traditional
foods
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. In conclusion,
although
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convenience
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foods
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are more simple to prepare and eat, I strongly believe that they can have more negative effects because those
foods
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tend to contain slight nutrients and
besides
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,that conventional
foods
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may be rarer to find in the future.
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