Some experts believe that when a country is already rich, any additional increase in economic wealth does not make its citizens any more satisfied. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Several specialists think that when a nation is already prosperous, an added richness to the economy makes the
people
not satisfied anymore. Use synonyms
This
essay disagrees with Linking Words
this
point of view.
In the current state of the global economy, wealthy states should never run out of funds for the welfare of the citizens. Linking Words
Therefore
, I disagree with the thought that additional wealth will just make Linking Words
people
unsatisfied. Use synonyms
Moreover
, it should always be the goal of rich countries to gain more in order to provide services for their Linking Words
people
Use synonyms
such
as education, health, and entertainment. In the Linking Words
last
two years, the whole world was devastated by the pandemic, and no one was spared. In fact, the global economic state was put into perils.
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Moreover
, many things had happened Linking Words
also
in the past and no one can even predict the future. With the updated technologies and increased population, a more prosperous country should continue to invest and collect more financial profits to make the nation stable for the future. Linking Words
Furthermore
, it is not to think that richer countries are greedy, but it is the fact that it got resources and backup for their Linking Words
people
's needs. Famines, wars, and other pandemics can happen anytime in the future, and countries like the United States Use synonyms
is
expected to always extend their financial Correct subject-verb agreement
are
aids
to those poorer ones.
To summarise everything that has been stated so far, it is paramount for the wealthier and prosperous states to continue access to a lot more financial Fix the agreement mistake
aid
resource
because it improves the economic stability of the country in the many more years to come.Fix the agreement mistake
resources
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