Economic development is very important for a nation's growth. There are people having different views regarding economic growth
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some thought it is necessary and some have
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of view.
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I completely agree with the statement that it is crucial for national development but it
also
has its own negative impacts on
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First of all, the rise in the economy of a country ultimately results in low poverty. Countries with good economic status have beneficial opportunities for their pupil.
However
, nations facing
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in their economic expansion are falling apart
consequently
resulting in inflation.
For example
, these days Pakistan is going through a very hard economic downfall.
As a result
, the prices of all the necessary food and living stuff
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increased that had affected
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of people badly.
Furthermore
, people are facing job issues as only
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factories are working causing higher
rates.
On the other hand
, the growth in the development of more and more factories to earn money has damaging effects, too.
This
rise not only results in air pollution but
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the main reason behind global warming.
For instance
, the ozone layer around the earth is
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because of the chemicals emitted from these factories. By
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of
this
protective
more ultraviolet rays are reaching the
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surface causing various skin diseases
such
as skin cancer.
To conclude
, I believe that economic
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is very crucial for a society to grow.
However
, I
also
agree with the opinion that in
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it has
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influence on
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