Some people say that economic development is necessary to reduce povert in the world. Others say economic growth should be stopped immediately to stop damaging the environment. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Economic development is very important for a nation's growth. There are people having different views regarding economic growth

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some thought it is necessary and some have

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the opposite

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point

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of view.

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I completely agree with the statement that it is crucial for national development but it

also

has its own negative impacts on

environment

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the environment

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. First of all, the rise in the economy of a country ultimately results in low poverty. Countries with good economic status have beneficial opportunities for their pupil.

However

, nations facing

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in their economic expansion are falling apart

consequently

resulting in inflation.

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, these days Pakistan is going through a very hard economic downfall.

As a result

, the prices of all the necessary food and living stuff

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increased that had affected

lives

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of people badly.

Furthermore

, people are facing job issues as only

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factories are working causing higher

proverty

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poverty

property

rates.

On the other hand

, the growth in the development of more and more factories to earn money has damaging effects, too.

This

rise not only results in air pollution but

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the main reason behind global warming.

For instance

, the ozone layer around the earth is

damaging

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because of the chemicals emitted from these factories. By

destruction

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the destruction

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of

this

protective

layer

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more ultraviolet rays are reaching the

earth

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surface causing various skin diseases

such

as skin cancer.

To conclude

, I believe that economic

wellbeing

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well-being

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is very crucial for a society to grow.

However

, I

also

agree with the opinion that in

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long-run

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it has

damaging

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a damaging

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influence on

environment

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the environment

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.