Even when poor countries get help from rich countries, hunger is still an issue. Discuss probable causes and solutions. Support your answer with specific reasons and examples

Despite the helping hand offered by the developed count,
starvation
still persists in
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poor
countries
.
This
is caused by the improper
distribution
of
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food
materials and it can only
solved
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be solved
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by the proper
management
of the resources.
This
essay
discuss
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about
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the cause and solution for
this
starvation
problem. One of the major
cause
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causes
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for
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the hunger
issue
in
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poor
countries
is the
lack
of
distribution
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a distribution
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network
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networks
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for
food
grains
. The
lack
of proper
distribution
results in the shortage of
food
grains
in the remote areas of the country. So a majority of the people in
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rural areas are denied access to
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food
grains
and can only depend on their local resources. A study held by WHO on the
issue
of malnutrition in
childrens
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children
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of underdeveloped
countries
conclude that the people in the remote areas of the underdeveloped
countries
are the most
malnutritioned
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malnutrition
and the
lack
of access to high nutritional value
food
grains
causes
this
. The only solution for
this
problem is by creating a proper
management
system for the
food
materials so that the
government
official make sure that the
food
grains
are reaching every nook and corner of the country.
This
will result in
proper
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distribution
of
the
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food
grains
and less hunger in
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poor
countries
.
For
example
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the
government
of
mozambique
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in
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2008 decided to eradicate the
starvation
problem in their country and developed a
food
management
network that made sure every citizen is accessible to the
food
grains
provided by the
government
. The result was an overwhelming decline of
starvation
by ninety
percentage
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. In conclusion,
starvation
is still an
issue
in
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poor
countries
despite the help offered by
the
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developed
countries
.
Lack
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The lack
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of
distribution
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a distribution
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system of
food
grains
causes
this
issue
and
this
can be solved by creating a proper
management
system of
food
grains
headed by the
government
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Colonialism
  • Foreign exploitation
  • International trade policies
  • Financial systems
  • Food insecurity
  • Agricultural productivity
  • Civil unrest
  • Governance
  • Misallocation
  • Climate change
  • Natural disasters
  • Subsistence farming
  • Commercial farming
  • Technological advances
  • Self-reliance
  • Sustainable food sources
  • International aid
  • Food security
  • Community-focused initiatives
  • Systemic causes
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