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The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles

The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles
#process #plastic #bottles
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The figure depicts the recycling of
glass
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.
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, It can be seen that the process by which
glass
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 is recycled is a multistep cyclical process,which consists of three main stages collection,processing and distribution .In the first stage,customers place used
bottles
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 in
collection
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the collection
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 bin and the
bottles
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 are collected by large trucks.In
stages
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stage
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 two,the
bottles
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 are taken to a cleaning plant,where they are cleaned with
high pressurized
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water. They are
then
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seperated
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separated
according to
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 colour (green,brown or clear)and taken to a
glass
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 factory where they are crushed into pieces.The pieces are melted into a furnace and
resulting
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the resulting
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 liquid ,
together with
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 new liquid
glass
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,is poured into a bottle mould. In the third and final stage ,new
bottles
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 are filled and packed
,
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and sent to
supermarket
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the supermarket
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 ,where the customers buy them
..
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Introduction: The introduction is missing.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Basic structure: Change the second paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words glass, bottles with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 2 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • recycling
  • mitigate
  • environmental impact
  • landfills
  • conservation
  • sorted
  • residual waste
  • adhesives
  • shredded
  • pellets
  • manufacturing
  • ecological
  • economical
  • sustainable
  • automation
  • raw material
  • life cycle
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