The diagram below shows the process of recycling plastic bottles
The figure depicts the recycling of
glass
.Overall
, It can be seen that the process by which glass
is recycled is a multistep cyclical process,which consists of three main stages collection,processing and distribution
.In the first stage,customers place used bottles
in collection
bin and the Add an article
the collection
bottles
are collected by large trucks.In stages
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bottles
are taken to a cleaning plant,where they are cleaned with high pressurized
water.
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high-pressurized
then
seperated
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separated
according to
colour (green,brown or clear)and taken to a glass
factory where they are crushed into pieces.The pieces are melted into a furnace and resulting
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the resulting
together with
new liquid glass
,is poured into a bottle mould.
In the third and final stage ,new bottles
are filled and packed,
and sent to Remove the comma
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the supermarket
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