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Working from home is becoming increasingly popular. What are the advantages and disadvantages of this trend?

#home #trend
Nowadays, a lot of people
work
 from
home
. It is becoming more popular day by day.
However
 what are the benefits of
this
 situation, and what are
drawbacks
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the drawbacks
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.
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?
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 In
this
 essay, I will look at both sides and make an effort to draw some conclusions. Let's commence by looking at the first advantage. It is
time
.
For example
, if
one
person
 is working from
home
, that
person
 saves her
time
.
Hence
, going to
work
 and come a
home
, these situations need a lot of
time
. If
this
person
works
 from
home
,
this
person
 saves her
time
.
In addition
, another benefit is working from
home
easier
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is easier
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 than working office.
Hence
, for ,example if
one
 individual
works
 from
home
,
and
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apply
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this
 human can a lot of
convince
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convincing
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 for
work
. If
this
person
work
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works
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 in a company,
this
 company has or has not convinced, it depends on
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the owners
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owners
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owner's
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 character. ,
However
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,However
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 coin has another side. Turning to the other side of the argument, working from
home
 lead to a sedentary lifestyle.
According to
 those who
works
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work
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 from
home
, their obesity percentage has dramatically risen. For ,example If
one
person
 has overweight, he never
works
 with a happy character. The second
one
 is almost never meeting her familiar
person
.
Hence
, for ,instance if
one
 human wort from
home
 and always
works
 from morning to evening. According
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to
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the can not meet her friend or parents.
To sum up
, in my view
work
 an office is better than
home
,
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apply
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 because working from
home
 lead to a sedentary lifestyle and obesity.
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