You are going to spend your vacation in Rome, Italy. Your friend's grandfather lives there and has offered to let you stay in his apartment. Write a letter to your friend's grandfather. In your letter: • Thank him for the offer but politely decline • Inform him of when you will be in Rome and your travel plans • Invite him for an outing

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Dear Mr John, It is really appreciated for your offering to stay at your home during my Italy vacation. Robert was informing me about your kindness. With due respect, I am very delighted about your purpose. My family

also

is thanking you for

this

. But, Kindly accept my apology to say no because my trip will be with my office colleagues. So I personally feel that it would not be appropriate to stay separate from them. On the 25th of April, I will be landing early in the morning at the airport. we will directly move to the hotel to get rid of jet lag. There will be a four-night stay in Rome and

then

I will move to Paris for three nights. The itinerary has been prepared and I would like to follow same with my colleagues. It will be highly appreciated by me if you would join us at your convenience. I will send you my plans. I hope you will understand my situation and accept my apology. I will be waiting for your reply if you could roam out with me. Yours sincerely, Mandeep Singh

Submitted by mandeepsinghsony2022 on Tue Mar 14 2023

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