the diagram below show the changes that have t aken place at West Park Secondary School since its construction in 1950.
The given diagrams illustrate the transformations that have taken place in the vicinity of West
Park
Secondary School since 1950. The figures showcase the developments made in three different years, namely 1950, 1980, and 2010. The school building remained in the same location throughout the years, while
the playground area has undergone significant changes.
In 1950, there were three houses and a large farmland in front of the school. Later, the houses were replaced by a car park
and a science block, respectively. The farmland was also
transformed into a sports field, which was longer than the newly built science block and car park
. However
, by 2010, the car park
had expanded, reducing the size of the sports field. Despite this
change, the science block remained the same size as it was when it was constructed.Submitted by robertasottile.rbst on
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park with synonyms.
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