The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The bar chart below shows the number of houses built per year in two cities, Derby and Nottingham, Between 2000 and 2009. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
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The following bar chart illustrates the
rates
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of how many
houses
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were constructed every year in two different cities which are Derby and
Nottingham
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from 2000 to 2009.
Overall
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, it can be clearly seen that the
last
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year had the highest number of built
houses
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in both cities in comparison with all the given, years.
However
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,
Nottingham
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had a significant drop in
rates
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in 2006 and 2008. Derby was having a dramatic decrease in constructed
houses
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in both 2000 and it remained stable in the next year.
On the other hand
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, the only years that Derby had higher
rates
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than
Nottingham
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were 2000, 2001 and 2007.
Nevertheless
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, the
rates
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of
Nottingham
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have been increasing since 2000, when they suddenly started to drop in 2005.
Moreover
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, in the next few ,years the number of built
houses
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in
Nottingham
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hit a peak
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words rates, houses, nottingham with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "drop" was used 2 times.
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