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The charts below show the workforce profile at the top management jobs by ethnicity and race in South Africa based on a 2015/16 report.

The charts below show the workforce profile at the top management jobs by ethnicity and race in South Africa based on a 2015/16 report.
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This
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 chart illustrates the workforce profile at the top
management
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jobs
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 by
ethnicity
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 and
race
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 in South Africa (Foreign national, African, Coloured, Indian and White) in 2015 and 2016.
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, the highest percentage is for foreign nationals, 68.90%.
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 means that most of the
people
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at
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in
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management
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jobs
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 are from a foreign nationality.
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, Africans come in second place by
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 and
race
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 in South Africa, 14.30%.
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, Indians come in 3rd place where they got 8.60% of the total number.
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,
colored
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coloured
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people
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 are not really
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diverse
versed
 in these
management
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jobs
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 in South Africa.
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, white
people
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 tend to be the least proportion in
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the workforce
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 profile at the top
management
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jobs
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 by
ethnicity
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 and
race
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, 3.50%. In conclusion, foreign national
people
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 were quite
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diverse
 among others,
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 comes Indian
people
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also
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, the lowest percentage was for white
people
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 in workforce profile at the top
management
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jobs
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 by
ethnicity
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 and
race
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words management, jobs, ethnicity, race, people with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Only 4 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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