The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.

The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018.
The graph illustrates how many shops opened and those which closed between 2011 and 2018. Over
this
period , it can be seen that fewer shops were opened. When it comes to closing
stores
, Figures fluctuated between 6000 and 7000 in the first 3 years of the shown period.
However
, these
numbers
decreased sharply in 2005 to less than 1000. After 2016, the number of closing
stores
plateaued nearly at 5000 until 2018. Meanwhile, opening
stores
showed a different trend with a dramatic decrease in 2012 as the figures dropped from approximately 9000 to around 5000 which represents a 50% fall. Afterwards, these
numbers
fluctuated between 2012 and 2015 raging from 4000 and 6000 new openings with a peak of 6000 seen in 2014. The
numbers
didn't show a big variance in the following 2 years until 2017 when new
stores
'
numbers
started to fall again to reach 3000 in 2018.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words stores, numbers with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "fall" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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