You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

Dear Tom, Hope you are doing well! I wanted to inform you that, I successfully graduated from my college

last

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month, especially, thanks to your textbook and you.

Firstly

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, I wanted to apologise for not returning the Marketing coursebook on time, as per my promise. Honestly, my grandfather got sick and I urgently had to rush to another city

for visiting

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to visit

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him. Recently I realized that I've not returned

you

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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the book

back

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apply

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and you have left the country. Since I know

this

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textbook is very crucial in terms of the information it has and on top of that the handwritten notes that you've prepared inside it.

However

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, I wanted to know that do you need it on an urgent basis or if you can wait for a

while

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. As I'm planning to visit your city

this

Linking Words

September. Anyways, if you want me to courier it, I can send

this

Linking Words

straight away,

otherwise

Linking Words

, I'll bring it with me when

we'll be

Wrong verb form

we're

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meeting. Let me know, how

sooner

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soon

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you want it. Once again sorry for

this

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inconvenience, I'll be waiting to hear from you. Warm wishes Yours truly

vikrantWed Mar 15 2023

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task response

Stay mindful of addressing all points mentioned in the prompt with balanced depth of detail.

coherence cohesion

Ensure a consistent and logical flow of ideas and information, grouping related points together using appropriate linking words.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

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