You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

Dear Tom, Hope you are doing well! I wanted to inform you that, I successfully graduated from my college

last

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month, especially, thanks to your textbook and you.

Firstly

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, I wanted to apologise for not returning the Marketing coursebook on time, as per my promise. Honestly, my grandfather got sick and I urgently had to rush to another city

for visiting

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to visit

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him. Recently I realized that I've not returned

you

Correct pronoun usage

apply

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the book

back

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apply

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and you have left the country. Since I know

this

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textbook is very crucial in terms of the information it has and on top of that the handwritten notes that you've prepared inside it.

However

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, I wanted to know that do you need it on an urgent basis or if you can wait for a

while

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. As I'm planning to visit your city

this

Linking Words

September. Anyways, if you want me to courier it, I can send

this

Linking Words

straight away,

otherwise

Linking Words

, I'll bring it with me when

we'll be

Wrong verb form

we're

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meeting. Let me know, how

sooner

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soon

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you want it. Once again sorry for

this

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inconvenience, I'll be waiting to hear from you. Warm wishes Yours truly

vikrant

Mar 15, 2023

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task response

Stay mindful of addressing all points mentioned in the prompt with balanced depth of detail.

coherence cohesion

Ensure a consistent and logical flow of ideas and information, grouping related points together using appropriate linking words.

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Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

187 words

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You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

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Some people think that parents should teach their children how to be good members of society. Others, however, believe that school is the best place to learn this.

In some cultures, children are often told that they can achieve anything if they try hard enough. What are the advantages and disadvantages of giving children this message.

Some people think studenti should study the science of food and how to prepare it.Others thinks students should spend time on important subjects .Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

Computer games and films containing violence are popular today. Some people think that these are harmful for our society and the government should ban them. Other argue that such games and films are fine for entertainment. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.