You borrowed an important textbook from a classmate last term. You now realize your classmate has returned home overseas and you still have a book. Write a letter to him/her. In your letter -apologise for the mistake -find out how important the book is to him/her -say what you will do

Dear Tom, Hope you are doing well! I wanted to inform you that, I successfully graduated from my college
last
month, especially, thanks to your textbook and you.
Firstly
, I wanted to apologise for not returning the Marketing coursebook on time, as per my promise. Honestly, my grandfather got sick and I urgently had to rush to another city
for visiting
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him. Recently I realized that I've not returned
you
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the book
back
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and you have left the country. Since I know
this
textbook is very crucial in terms of the information it has and on top of that the handwritten notes that you've prepared inside it.
However
, I wanted to know that do you need it on an urgent basis or if you can wait for a
while
. As I'm planning to visit your city
this
September. Anyways, if you want me to courier it, I can send
this
straight away,
otherwise
, I'll bring it with me when
we'll be
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meeting. Let me know, how
sooner
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soon
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you want it. Once again sorry for
this
inconvenience, I'll be waiting to hear from you. Warm wishes Yours truly
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