The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The line chart indicates the
number
of overseas
visitors
who went to three different regions of a European country from the period of years from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
, it can be seen that the
number
of tourists visiting these three
areas
was generally higher in 2007 than in 1987.
In addition
, Coast and lake
areas
were more popular than mountain
areas
.
First,
the lakes were the least popular region and there were only 10
thousand
foreign
visitors
in 1987.
However
, it crossed over the
number
of mountain
visitors
to 25
thousand
in 1992. The increasing trend was kept and it bulged in 1997 and
also
crossed over the
number
of coast tourists, in doing so, it reached a pack to 75
thousand
in 2002.
Nevertheless
, it decreased sharply to 50
thousand
visitors
in 2007.
Second,
the coast was the most famous area with 40
thousand
visitors
in 1987.
While
it decreased slightly to 35
thousand
in 1992, it had an uptrend and re-reached the top
at the end
of the recorded period, presenting 75
thousand
.
Third,
the
number
of people who visited mountain
areas
increased more or less to 35
thousand
in 2007 from 20
thousand
in 1987.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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