The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
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The line chart indicates the
number
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of overseas
visitors
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who went to three different regions of a European country from the period of years from 1987 to 2007.
Overall
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, it can be seen that the
number
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of tourists visiting these three
areas
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was generally higher in 2007 than in 1987.
In addition
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, Coast and lake
areas
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were more popular than mountain
areas
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.
First,
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the lakes were the least popular region and there were only 10
thousand
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foreign
visitors
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in 1987.
However
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, it crossed over the
number
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of mountain
visitors
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to 25
thousand
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in 1992. The increasing trend was kept and it bulged in 1997 and
also
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crossed over the
number
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of coast tourists, in doing so, it reached a pack to 75
thousand
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in 2002.
Nevertheless
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, it decreased sharply to 50
thousand
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visitors
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in 2007.
Second,
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the coast was the most famous area with 40
thousand
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visitors
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in 1987.
While
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it decreased slightly to 35
thousand
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in 1992, it had an uptrend and re-reached the top
at the end
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of the recorded period, presenting 75
thousand
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.
Third,
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the
number
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of people who visited mountain
areas
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increased more or less to 35
thousand
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in 2007 from 20
thousand
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in 1987.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words number, visitors, areas, thousand with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "decreased" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • overseas visitors
  • number of
  • areas
  • European country
  • between
  • 1987 and 2000
  • graph
  • introduce
  • overview
  • trends
  • describe
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • summarize
  • main findings
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