The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropology in work after five years. Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The chart below shows what Anthropology graduates from one university did after finishing their undergraduate degree course. The table shows the salaries of the Anthropology in work after five years. 

Summaries the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
This
pie chart displays the destination of Anthropology
alumni
from one university,
while
the table illustrates Anthropology
alumni
’s salaries after they work five years in three different employment types. It’s clear that there were 9 persons who had a job or continued to study in every 10 Anthropology graduates. And over 55 per
cent
of employees earned at least 75
thousand
dollars
. Only 8 per
cent
of
alumni
were neither working nor studying after graduation. There were half of the graduates had a full-time job, and 15 per
cent
of
alumni
worked a part-time job, 5 per
cent
studied for a postgrad degree and worked at the same time. The
alumni
who worked for the government got the highest pay, 50 per
cent
of graduates earned over one hundred
thousand
dollars
per year. The
alumni
worked for private companies acquiring less income than the government sector and the freelance consultants, only 55 per
cent
got over 75
thousand
dollars
in pay. The freelance consultant and government sectors both had 80 per
cent
of
alumni
paid over 75
thousand
dollars
by their employers.
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