It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this option? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behaviour to children.
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There is no denying the fact that the main impact of
punishment
is arguable. While
it is a commonly held belief that the
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kids
should be panished
to understand what is right and what is wrong. The question is, do Correct your spelling
punished
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kids
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kids'
kid's
punishment
can help them to be distinct? and what type of punishment
should be applied. From my perspective, I strongly believe that the
children should not be punished and Correct article usage
apply
parents
can teach them by using other effective methods. This
essay will shed light upon why I believe this
.
On the one hand, penalising juveniles can cause multiple psychological problems, parents
must consider the well being
of the child and avoid punishing them because it might lead to Add a hyphen
well-being
a
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disasterious
effects. To illustrate, if the Correct your spelling
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parents
hit their offsprings
, they will start to Fix the agreement mistake
offspring
haet
them and neglect their Correct your spelling
hate
words
and
might cause them to intend to totally reject their Correct word choice
which
parents
in any advice that their parents
ask. In other
words
, youngsters in their formative age, they
tend to refuse Correct pronoun usage
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others
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others'
other's
words
and find it challenging for them to obey to
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apply
Subsequently
, the adults must treat them well and try to absorb their violent
quietly by teaching them Replace the word
violence
the
manners without penalizing them. To illustrate, a prestigious journal article published that 70% of youngsters behaved Correct article usage
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oppositly
when their family punished them and 40% of them developed depression. Correct your spelling
oppositely
opposite
Hence
, it becomes apparent that juveniles must be treated in a specific way without punishing
in order to teach them right from wrong.
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punishment
On the other hand
, there are several methods to educate the
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kids
to behave. To embark, the
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parents
can educate their children by giving them advice in a creative way such
as motivating them and giving them monetary incentive
when they listen to them. Fix the agreement mistake
incentives
As well as
, family
can visit the family consultant to guide them and help them in how to treat their children. Add an article
the family
a family
In other
words
, some family
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families
to deal
with their young Change the verb form
dealing
offsprings
, so it would be a good idea to go to Fix the agreement mistake
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specialist
who specialized in the treatment of Add an article
a specialist
the specialist
such
cases. Indeed, punishment
will never help parents
to deal with their kids
as this
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required a special deal in order to obey their Fix the agreement mistake
generation
family
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family's
words
.
In conclusion, in my opinion, I strongly believe that punishment
not
a perfect treatment to guide Add a missing verb
is not
the
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kids
. This
is because this
generation may need to guide them by understand
their mind and Change the verb form
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respect
them.Wrong verb form
respecting
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