The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.

The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.
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The map depicts the modification of a small municipality called Islip, commencing in 2005 and culminating in 2010.
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, the town had a dramatic renovation, most notably the
area
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in the
centre
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of the plan.
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, the large
road
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around the amenities
also
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had significant changes. The shop
area
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which is above the main
road
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in 2005 had been divided into 4 smaller categories: Bus station, Shopping
centre
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, Car park and New housing respectively.
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the main
road
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in 2005’s plan had been replaced by pedestrians only and the other shop which is under the main
road
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had remained unchanged. Another point is that a large
road
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has been added around the
centre
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of town which is a Dual Carriageway to make it convenient and easier to transport. The housing
area
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which used to be opposite the shops had been relocated to the left-hand side and a new housing
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had been added next to them. There was a small park on the right-hand side of the
centre
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that had become smaller in size. The school and housing which was outside the
centre
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had remained intact.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words area, centre, road with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "remained" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
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