The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.

The maps below show the center of a small town called islip from 2005 to 2010.
The map depicts the modification of a small municipality called Islip, commencing in 2005 and culminating in 2010.
Overall
, the town had a dramatic renovation, most notably the
area
in the
centre
of the plan.
Furthermore
, the large
road
around the amenities
also
had significant changes. The shop
area
which is above the main
road
in 2005 had been divided into 4 smaller categories: Bus station, Shopping
centre
, Car park and New housing respectively.
Next,
the main
road
in 2005’s plan had been replaced by pedestrians only and the other shop which is under the main
road
had remained unchanged. Another point is that a large
road
has been added around the
centre
of town which is a Dual Carriageway to make it convenient and easier to transport. The housing
area
which used to be opposite the shops had been relocated to the left-hand side and a new housing
area
had been added next to them. There was a small park on the right-hand side of the
centre
that had become smaller in size. The school and housing which was outside the
centre
had remained intact.
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