Nowadays parents put too much pressure on their children to succeed. What is the reason for doing this? Is it a negative or positive development? Give your explanation using some relevant examples from your experience.
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as, in our society, there are so many spoiled Linking Words
children
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pressure
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to succeed in Use synonyms
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also
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parents
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children
to always be at a high level of creativity and achievement.
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positive development could result later in the future, Linking Words
instead
of just sitting at home without doing anything that helps the Linking Words
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parents
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pressure
and effort to see them achieve in Use synonyms
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child
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pressure
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.
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parents
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child
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parents
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, no one could succeed in Linking Words
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