The chart below shows the expenditure of two countries on consumer goods in 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The given bar graph illustrates the amount of money
spend
on client items (cars, computers, boots, perfume, cameras) Wrong verb form
spent
by
Change preposition
in
France
and the Use synonyms
UK
. The data Use synonyms
Add a missing verb
was given
given
in thousands Add the auxiliary verb
are given
pounds
sterling in 2010.
Change preposition
of pounds
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
the number of spending Linking Words
for
cars, books and cameras for the Change preposition
on
UK
was higher than the same figure for Use synonyms
France
. Use synonyms
However
, the quantity of spend Linking Words
for
Change preposition
on
camputers
and perfume in Correct your spelling
computers
France
was bigger than the same indication for the Use synonyms
UK
.
The Use synonyms
number of
amount of money spend Correct quantifier usage
apply
for
Change preposition
on
car
in Fix the agreement mistake
cars
France
(400) was lower by about 60 as high as Use synonyms
the
Change preposition
in the
UK
Use synonyms
one
. Correct pronoun usage
apply
This
figure for Linking Words
Add an article
the consumer
a consumer
consumer
in Fix the agreement mistake
consumers
France
for books (300) was more considerable than expenditure in the Use synonyms
UK
. Use synonyms
Following
Linking Words
this
, a 200 gap was the case in the figures for higher expending in the Linking Words
UK
and Use synonyms
France
(around 150).
The amount of Use synonyms
expending
for Replace the word
expenses
camputers
in the Correct your spelling
computers
UK
(approximately 250) was a little lower by about 10 than the same figure for Use synonyms
France
. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the quantity of spending money Linking Words
for
perfume Change preposition
on
for
the Change preposition
in
UK
was nearly as high as the same index for Use synonyms
France
(200).Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Replace the words france, uk with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "give" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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