Write a letter to your friend, •You have relocated to a different land. •Informing you have joined a course. •Why this course will be helpful to him.

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Dear Kai, It’s been a long time since we exchanged notes about our current situation. I hope you and your family are doing well. To start, it’s been 3 months since I moved from New York to London.

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, it was very daunting, but now I seem to have gotten used to

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lifestyle. If I know you well, you are itchy to ask me why the transition. You know I have been procrastinating in pursuing

further

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studies. Well, I

finally

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decided to go ahead with the dream of acquiring a master’s degree in marketing. If you ask me, you should enrol on

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course, more so, because you have all the required practical experience.

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, you lack academic qualifications

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and trust me

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course will help you achieve them. I am running a bit late for my lecture,

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, will have to end

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note here, but hope to hear from you. See you soon, Manni

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 8.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 8.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

157 words

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