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The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade*-labelled tea and pineapples in 2010 and 2015 in five European countries. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given table graphs depict information about the different five countries that sold
pineapples
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 and fair trade-labelled
tea
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 between 2010 and 2015. The data has been calibrated in millions of
euros
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.
Overall
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, it is crystal clear that the maximum
sale
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 of
tea
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 was from France
whereas
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 the least
pineapples
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 were sold in Germany. At a fleeting glance, it is evident that in 2010, €2.5
tea
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 was sold in France
while
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this
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 figure increased sharply by 21
million
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euros
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.
Moreover
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, the
sale
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 of
tea
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 went up and got doubled in Australia which was from 4 to 8
million
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euros
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.
Along with
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 it, in both years, the
sale
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 of fairtrade - the labelled
tea
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 was from 1.8 to 3
million
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euros
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 in Germany, Netherlands and Norway.  Moving towards the remaining information, it can be clearly seen that the highest
sale
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 of
pineapples
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 was in Australia between 16 and 48
million
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euros
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.
Besides
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this
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, the
sale
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 of
pineapples
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 in France was 2 and 6.5
million
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euros
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 respectively. Apart from it, in the Netherlands, the
sale
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 of
pineapples
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 was 1.6 and 5
million
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euros
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. Meanwhile, there was a difference of 0.8
million
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euros
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 in the
sale
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 of
pineapples
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 in both years. At
last
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, the
sale
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 of
pineapples
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 was more in 2010 as compared to the year 2015 which was 2
million
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euros
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pineapples, tea, euros, sale, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "information" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sales figures
  • Fairtrade-labelled
  • European countries
  • increase/decrease
  • growth/decline
  • trends
  • significant
  • noteworthy
  • highest/lowest sales
  • figures
  • comparisons
  • time frame
  • consistent growth
  • main trends
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