Some people think the government should pay for health care and education , but there is no agreement about whether it is the government’s responsibility . What is your opinion ?
There are controversial perspectives heating a debate over 
responsibility
 Correct article usage
the responsibility
the
 Change preposition
of the
government
 for its members . Use synonyms
While
 some hold a strong view that healthcare and Linking Words
education
 should be paid Use synonyms
by
 authorities , the opposite makes a statement that it is not liable for the state to pay these Change preposition
for by
expense 
. In my opinion , the Fix the agreement mistake
expenses
government
 should support financially , but the Use synonyms
government
 should not be responsible for all payments . 
Without Use synonyms
shadow
 of a doubt , healthcare and Add an article
a shadow
education
 should be paid Use synonyms
by
 the Change preposition
for by
government
 . Use synonyms
While
 providing free Linking Words
education
 in order to revamp the academic level of the workforce , Use synonyms
covering
 medical expenses so as to enhance people's working productivity and Correct word choice
and covering
to 
reduce the burden on the country . Fix the infinitive
apply
For example
 , Germany is one of the most Linking Words
blossom
 Replace the word
blossoming
nation
 in the world, paying for healthcare in the form of insurance and Change to a plural noun
nations
education
 through scholarships to develop Use synonyms
Add an article
the country
country 
. Fix the agreement mistake
countries
Hence
 , it is necessary for the state to cover the fees for Linking Words
two
 aforementioned backbone industries  .
Correct article usage
the two
While
 the necessity of payment from authorities widely Linking Words
acknowledge 
, the state should not be Change the verb form
acknowledges
bear
 full liability for them . Add an article
a bear
National
 budget is limited and it must be allocated to various fields in order to make the country a Add an article
The national
prosper
 nation . Replace the word
prosperous
For instance
 , technology , military and transportation are important industries . Linking Words
Thus
 , it is not vital for the governors to be fully accountable for all the fees .
In conclusion , the Linking Words
government
 should support financially , but the Use synonyms
government
 should not be responsible for all payments .Use synonyms
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite