Some people think that we should divide students based on their academic ability, while others think we should educate all students together. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Some people think that dividing
students
based on their academic performances are
acceptable, Correct subject-verb agreement
is
whereas
others believe that all students
should be educated equally and together. However
, I would like to argue that education should remain same
for everyone. Correct article usage
the same
This
essay will discuss both views and conclude with my opinions.
On the one hand, Few communities still rely on ranking
education Add an article
the ranking
system
, where they expect kids to score better than their fellow mates. Fix the agreement mistake
systems
Moreover
, Many authorities in educational institutions divide syllabus
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syllabi
according to
students
' skills. For instance
, Higher ranking students
are allowed to enroll
in difficult courses, Change the spelling
enrol
while
lower ranking
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lower-ranking
students
are restricted to study
uneasy lessons. Wrong verb form
studying
Furthermore
, This
inappropriate educational system could be a barrier to the practical knowledge
of a student.
On the other hand
, Some folks suggest that educating all students
without an
inequality among them is considered good education. Apart from Correct article usage
apply
students
' grades, practical and general knowledge
should be taught to them in an adequate quantity by instructors. For example
, A student who is fluent in practical knowledge
more than theoretical is said to be a successful person. Despite this
, many parents are focussing keenly on their children's examination marks.
In conclusion, Schools and colleges should stop exaggerating students
' theoretical achievements and concern more about practical sessions to improvise their learning techniques. In my opinion, students
who perform excellent
at practical Change the adjective
excellently
knowledges
should be praised more. Equality is must Change the wording
knowledge
pieces of knowledge
bits of knowledge
needed
between all Change the verb form
need
be needed
students
who like to gain their
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apply
knowledge
in all fields. This
can be changed in the future by spreading awareness among public
.Add an article
the public
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