Your car insurance company has told you that they are going to increase the amount you have to pay in insurance for your car each month. You are not happy about this. Write a letter to your insurance company. In your letter explain Why you are writing to them Why you think the insurance should not be increased What you want them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam My name is Saber Youcef and I have been a client of your company for nearly 5 years. I am writing

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letter to express my dissatisfaction regarding your recent decision to increase the payment of my monthly subscription, I have held my car insurance for

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long for the reason that the price that you offered is better than other companies. I see no reason for

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change, because the service is the same and you did not offer any new options worth paying the extra amount of money, and in comparison with other companies, your price is now higher, which gives you no extra advantage in the market. I request that you re-evaluate your decision,

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I have been a client of your company for a long time, with the current prices I see no other option than changing my insurance to another company. As my request is urgent, a quick response would be appreciated. Yours faithfully Saber Youcef

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 4.0

Complete response

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8 paragraphs

165 words

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