In the future, nobody will buy printed newspaper or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Some people think that in the future the popularity of
books
and printed media will decline. That is
because of the presence of a free alternative on the internet. This
essay completely disagrees with that opinion.
To commence with, many people prefer the hard copy of books
over the soft one. The reason for that is
the increased quality of the experience of reading when holding a book in their hands as well as
the minimized exposure to blue light. To explain, reading for a long time from a device will increase the exposure to blue light leading to disturbed sleep patterns. As a consequence
, many individuals are going back to reading from actual books
specially
before bed.
Replace the word
especially
Moreover
, the elders usually read the newspaper more than the
online magazines even after the current technological development. Correct article usage
apply
That is
because it is hard to change a habit that has been built in
years. Change preposition
for
In addition
to the difficulties that they meet when they try to use smart phones
. Correct your spelling
smartphones
For example
, many grandparents in Egypt enjoy their daily morning routine which consists of reading their favourite newspaper with their coffee at the coffeehouse.
In conclusion, I am all for reading the different types of printed publications either books
or newspapers. As many young adults choose to read books
especially those who read a lot and those who read at night. Another reason for my opinion is the older people in society and their need of
the easiest way to know the news which is the printed newspaper.Change preposition
for
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coherence and cohesion
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coherence and cohesion
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Your opinion
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