The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate
a
current Islip town Correct article usage
the
centre
and how it will look in future after some changes.
Overall
, it is clear that
a number of major modifications are going to be in the Islip town centre
. These include constructing dual
carriageway, car Correct article usage
a dual
park
, shopping centre
and other supporting facilities .
At present , the main road
is situated between shops . The park
is connected to the main road
. Countryside
is on the north Add an article
The countryside
side
of main
Change the article
the main
road
, while
the south side
has two housing .
In the second map , it can be seen that in future, there are planned
to develop the dual carriageway around the bus station, car Replace the word
plans
park
and so on. Main
Change the article
The main
road
is to be used for only pedestrians and the north side
of it will construct the bus station, shopping centre
, car park
and housing. The shops , park
and schools will remain the same . The housing will relocate on the left Fix the agreement mistake
parks
side
of the shops , while
the
right Change preposition
on the
side
the new housing will build across the park
. Another housing will locate outside the dual carriageway.Submitted by opshorajhumpa2001 on
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