The maps bellow show the centre of a small town called Islip as it is now , and plans for its development.
The maps illustrate
a
current Islip town Correct article usage
the
centre
and how it will look in future after some changes.
Use synonyms
Overall
, Linking Words
it is clear that
a number of major modifications are going to be in the Islip town Linking Words
centre
. These include constructing Use synonyms
dual
carriageway, car Correct article usage
a dual
park
, shopping Use synonyms
centre
and other supporting facilities .
At present , the main Use synonyms
road
is situated between shops . The Use synonyms
park
is connected to the main Use synonyms
road
. Use synonyms
Countryside
is on the north Add an article
The countryside
side
of Use synonyms
main
Change the article
the main
road
, Use synonyms
while
the south Linking Words
side
has two housing .
In the second map , it can be seen that in future, there are Use synonyms
planned
to develop the dual carriageway around the bus station, car Replace the word
plans
park
and so on. Use synonyms
Main
Change the article
The main
road
is to be used for only pedestrians and the north Use synonyms
side
of it will construct the bus station, shopping Use synonyms
centre
, car Use synonyms
park
and housing. The shops , Use synonyms
Use synonyms
park
and schools will remain the same . The housing will relocate on the left Fix the agreement mistake
parks
side
of the shops , Use synonyms
while
Linking Words
the
right Change preposition
on the
side
the new housing will build across the Use synonyms
park
. Another housing will locate outside the dual carriageway.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
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Vocabulary: Replace the words centre, park, road, side with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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