The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).

The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million).
The chart shows the total of people who went
for
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international travel and provided the differences
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that occured
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occured
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occurred
over the years from 1990 to 2005. Different
continent
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mentioned
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in the chart
such
as Europe,
America
,
and
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Asia and the
pacific
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Pacific
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. In 1990
the a
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study was about people who went
for
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international travel to know where they go and what continent
receive
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more visitors. In the
beginning
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the number of people travelled is 448.9.
This
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focued
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focused
to be specific to know what they choose. Europe came first in welcoming
vistiors
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visitors
with 280.2 and
second
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is
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America
.
Also
, the two were increasing sharply being the two favourite places.
However
,
while
America
and Europe welcomed more visitors Asia and the pacific were
grewing
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growing
dramatically over the years. Another fact, in 2005 they passed
America
in the total of holidaymakers and outnumbered
America
.
Moreover
,
although
Africa and the Middle East came
lastly
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in numbers, they still manage to keep increasing. The research focused
in
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two different periods of time considering
in
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where
poeple possibily
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people possibly
go.
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words america with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • significant increase
  • international travel
  • popular destinations
  • economic growth
  • technological advancements
  • ease of travel
  • cultural exchange
  • globalization
  • fluctuations
  • trend
  • millions of travelers
  • annual growth rate
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