An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?
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surgery
grows sharply to change or improve their handsomeness. People start to consider Use synonyms
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surgery
as a way to upgrade their appearance and to copy the shape of Use synonyms
celebrity
. Correct article usage
a celebrity
Moreover
, it is a positive Linking Words
development
for those who suffered from a facial injuryUse synonyms
,
or those with birth defects. A chance to improve their look and to make them feel blessed. Remove the comma
apply
This
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impact
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an impact
different
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the different
public
.
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the public
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surgery
increased dramatically it provide the opportunity to those who got damaged by several injuriesUse synonyms
Correct word choice
and
inresulted
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resulted
in resulted
defects
in their faces. Change preposition
in defects
Furthermore
, with new technology, Linking Words
development
, and methodsUse synonyms
of
,science produced an operation to fix the defects a person has. Change preposition
apply
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a harmful injury to her face and hands. Because of cosmetic ,Correct your spelling
from resulted
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surgery
she had the opportunity to treat herself and heal herself. Add a comma
,surgery
To sum up
, it is a positive Linking Words
development
and will help society if they got a damaging wound in their body.
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However
, the negative side of Linking Words
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surgery
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societies
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addicted
doing
more. Every year they change their presence to become like a specific celebrity. Personally, I know a presenter name Halima Bolnd she used Change preposition
to doing
this
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surgery
to choose a face every year and Use synonyms
this
is terrible. Linking Words
In addition
, in society nowadays some do cosmetics without a reason. Linking Words
Finally
, Linking Words
although
it is a helpful Linking Words
development
, some see itUse synonyms
a
way to keep changing Change preposition
as a
display
.
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displays
To conclude
, yes it is a positive Linking Words
development
but they need to put some rules in order to do it. It is people's right to choose what to do, but changing face every year is like having a new identity and personality.Use synonyms
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