An increasing number of people are choosing to have cosmetic surgery in order to improve their appearance. Why are more people choosing to have operation to change the way they look? Do you think this a positive or negative development?

In the meantime, cosmetic

surgery

grows sharply to change or improve their handsomeness. People start to consider

this

surgery

as a way to upgrade their appearance and to copy the shape of

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Moreover

, it is a positive

development

for those who suffered from a facial injury

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or those with birth defects. A chance to improve their look and to make them feel blessed.

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surgery

made

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in our time appearance

surgery

increased dramatically it provide the opportunity to those who got damaged by several injuries

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resulted

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defects

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in their faces.

Furthermore

, with new technology,

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, and methods

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,science produced an operation to fix the defects a person has.

For example

, my older sister got injured by hot water

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a harmful injury to her face and hands. Because of cosmetic ,

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she had the opportunity to treat herself and heal herself.

To sum up

, it is a positive

development

and will help society if they got a damaging wound in their body.

However

, the negative side of

this

surgery

is some

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are

addict

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doing

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more. Every year they change their presence to become like a specific celebrity. Personally, I know a presenter name Halima Bolnd she used

this

surgery

to choose a face every year and

this

is terrible.

In addition

, in society nowadays some do cosmetics without a reason.

Finally

,

although

it is a helpful

development

, some see it

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way to keep changing

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To conclude

, yes it is a positive

development

but they need to put some rules in order to do it. It is people's right to choose what to do, but changing face every year is like having a new identity and personality.